Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Nowadays, people are constantly travelling since globalisation has made it possible for the majority of the population. Some people seek enjoyment they cannot find in their home towns even though they tend to be discriminated by locals. This does not result in a harmonious society, so the government can ensure it by setting guidelines for both the locals and foreigners.
To begin with, the foreigners should participate in local events to get closer to the locals, and they should learn about the culture and history, as this makes locals feel acknowledged. It helps the first impressions of a foreigner to a local if the foreigner is seen caring about the local history. This is how a foreigner should act when visiting new countries with different customs.
Likewise, children and adults altogether should be taught about other countries. They should understand how the foreigner is alien to a new country and should be lenient when a foreigner makes mistakes. Similarly, it is also necessary for them to understand what offends a foreigner and what does not. A foreigner may not know how things function and work and should not be treated badly, hence locals should learn to be lenient. Lastly, the government should enforce laws so that the foreigner does not feel oppressed and violated. This leaves the foreigner with an impression that the host country is a harmonious society.
To sum up, both sides should learn to be lenient with each other, as they do not understand each other. Instead of fighting, they should learn each other and try to get along.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, lastly, likewise, may, similarly, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01526717557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72507323286 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522900763359 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4479098494 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918470730356 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398766628675 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404642010909 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620579414853 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045661205101 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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