Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that students study with their friends at school is the most effective ways for them to study. While others claim that they should study alone to have best results. In this essay, I will discuss both views and show why I am in favour of both ideas
There has many reasons why some agree that learner should study in a group. The principal reason of it is children can communicate with their friends. Learning in a place where has a lot of peoples can help children easier to share their ideas with their friends to discuss. Children can learn in a co-operative environment and also improve their communicaton skills. For instance, when teenagers have to do difficult homework, they can ask their friend for a help to solve that exercise. Furthermore, this method could be more time-saving when each member’s academic strengths are exerted through reasonably divided workload. For example, when they do the presentation, they can share the workload with each person such as who should do the slides, who write the content and so on.
On the other hand, studying alone help study concentrate on their work. If learners learn in a noisy place, they might playing with their member and do not do their homework. But if student learn alone, they can be more concentrate and study better. An example is scientists show that students do their task better when they study alone .Another reason is that they can create their own ideas. They do not to follow to someone’s opinion. So their friendship do not cause a break .
In closing,I belive that studying in both way can help students to study better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82078853047 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48482896796 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3063678127 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270940601942 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106102586339 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100665897213 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225823469223 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10817337475 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.