global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. what causes global warming? what solutions are there to this problem?
These days global warming is one of the biggest problem and the serious threat for future of our planet. The main question is that what is the meaning of global warming? In fact, increasing the temperature due to air pollution is the definition of global warming. Rising temperature causes climate change. This phenomenon threats the life of all creatures around the world. I am going to explain, what are the reasons and solutions of this issue throughout this essay.
After Industrial Revolution, the human started to extract of natural sources and many of factories were built to producing different kind of goods. Fossil fuels are burned without any control and trees are cut down every day while, mostly there are not replaced. In addition, mankind doesn’t care to other animals and planets' life and vanishes them regardless. People use too much electricity daily; while, it is producing by burning fossil fuels and steaming plenty water in many of countries.
Although, the human activities were vary disappointment during recent century, there are some solutions yet. Actually, the nature can help us. For instance, we can use renewable energies instead of old methods. Solar system is using in some of countries nowadays and it seems that it is a good experience, though, it is a bit expensive. Using from wind energy is another way. Also, the rainforests must be managed more than past. The cutting of trees should be decreased and planting should be increased. Likewise governments can avoid using old cars and also, refresh the polluted factories to decreasing air pollution. More than this, we can protect earth by managing the water sources.
To conclude, I believe that we have a chance to save the world by taking true decisions and changing people lifestyle. If we don’t do nothing now, next generation will pay a heavy cost. The worse thing is that, our planet will be died.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
...s. Although, the human activities were vary disappointment during recent century, t...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the countries') or simply say ''some countries''.
Suggestion: some of the countries; some countries
...f old methods. Solar system is using in some of countries nowadays and it seems that it is a good...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...eased and planting should be increased. Likewise governments can avoid using old cars an...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: NOT_NOTHING[1]
Message: Double negation. You probably should say 'anything'.
Suggestion: anything
...anging people lifestyle. If we don’t do nothing now, next generation will pay a heavy c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, likewise, so, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01582278481 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61505592008 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636075949367 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1932760805 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0454545455 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225618542273 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577324614533 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110197336292 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138382902677 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217748601277 0.056905535591 383% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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