Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, many of children have less physical activities than past. There are many reasons for this phenomenon. Changing the kind of games and life style and also existing more facilities than previous are the most important points. That’s why, many of people, especially parents, believe that sport lessons must be compulsory in schools although there are some opposite points. I absolutely agree with this opinion and I am going to explain that throughout this essay.
Some people believe that sport is not as important as other skills that children must be learn during school years, so, it must not be compulsory as a lesson such as others. They think that sport wastes the pupils' time. Also it is an extra cost for schools because managers have to consume money to preparing sport facilities. It is possible that this group of people don’t have exact concept of obesity phenomenon among teenagers or they don’t consider the physically and mentally benefits of sport.
I disagree with this kind of people. In fact I believe that sport is important as mathematic and literature for student. Is there isn’t sport time in curriculum, likely many of children don’t do sport even for 10 minute the long of month. More than physical effects, sport makes everyone cheerful and also, students learn team working by doing some sports. In addition, the sport time is a very nice verity among of some hard lessons such as chemistry, algebra, geometry, geography and so on. I remember from my school time, that we were very happy in days that we had sport in plan. In addition, many of children and their teachers can discover their hidden talents when they do sport regularly.
To conclude, I think that governments should take more attention to pupil's physical activities and even pay more money for that. Because there are many items that causes less movement children these days and if we have an extended horizon, spending money for sport not only isn’t wasting, but also it is a long term investment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94690265487 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45430564994 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1715522846 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296301956375 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920301649215 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703709350352 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175059449737 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630384967544 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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