Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.
Why do you think this is the case?
What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?
These days, teenagers show a far stronger preference for online communication than direct conversation. I firmly believe this phenomenon has actually stemmed from teenagers' lack of social experience in communicating and a project of reducing admissions for social events for teenagers would probably tackle this problem.
The main reason why most teenagers detest meeting others in person is that they are socially inexperienced in communication. Teenagers, in modern societies, are, in fact, born and raised in an environment surrounded by electronic devices, and therefore are more used to communicating online rather than directly. Take me as an example, as a typical gen Z, I mostly communicate through texting apps and social platforms such as: Instagram, Facebook, Zalo,...While I can easily express my ideas through text messages and emoji icons, I find it extremely hard to start and maintain a direct conversation with others, which easily leads to unpleasant and award experience. Most teenagers like me, it is our unfamiliarity with face-to-face conversations that deter us from enjoying meeting others in person.
Furthermore, I strongly recommend lawmakers should enact a project to subsidise the admission fee of social gathering events for students in order to encourage youngsters to socialise directly. The subsidised rate surely would be a great motivation for teenagers to participate in social events, where they would have plenty of opportunities to meet and talk with people of all ages, which subsequently help to enhance their social skills. In my city, for instance, a similar project has recently been enacted. While in the past, city events were mostly attended by adult and senior citizens, the subsidised prices have now attracted more and more teenagers to these events. And these teenagers often gather in groups and constantly talk and share with others directly and confidently. This project has surely made social gathering events an excellent occasions for the young in my country to meet people in person more.
In conclusion, the key reason that youngsters now prefer to online communicating is the lack of social skills in communicating. And a campaign of reducing prices of social events for students would tremendously help teenagers improve their communication skills and subsequently be more comfortable in face-to-face meetings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...forms such as: Instagram, Facebook, Zalo,...While I can easily express my ideas th...
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Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...s such as: Instagram, Facebook, Zalo,...While I can easily express my ideas through t...
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Line 3, column 853, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'occasion'?
Suggestion: occasion
...de social gathering events an excellent occasions for the young in my country to meet peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50684931507 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11215752954 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553424657534 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7609986939 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181385448387 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748942282189 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480581043521 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114855139059 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230181681385 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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