The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries

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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The horizontal bar graph compares information about the expenditure on six distinct consumer products by the people of Germany, Italy,france,and Britain.
Overall,it is observed that individuals of Britain spend more money whereas,germany’s people expend least amount on all the given consumer goods among people of other nations.
From the fleeting glance, it is vivid that in case of Britain,the proportion consume by personal stereos and racquets is approximately 150 thousand pounds sterling and by permunes is 160 and more than 160 thousand by cds.Also, people spend less than 160 pounds sterling on toys and maximum on photographic films and it is nearly 170 thousand pounds sterling.However,in france, people exhaust least on tennis racquets,little more than it on personal stereos and perfumes and for cds and toys amount is same respectively.moreover,they also use maximum money on photographic films .
Probing ahead,Italians spend most money on toys and least on personal stereos and cds and little more than this on perfumes,tennis racquets and photographic films and that is less than 160 thousand pounds sterling. While in case of Germany,people exhaust almost same ratio on personal stereos,perfumes,toys,cds.as well as,maximum money is spent on tennis racquets is less than 150 thousand pounds sterling and minimum on photographic films .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , france
...products by the people of Germany, Italy,france,and Britain. Overall,it is observed th...
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Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...many, Italy,france,and Britain. Overall,it is observed that individuals of Britain...
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Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , germany
...uals of Britain spend more money whereas,germany’s people expend least amount on all the...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'expend the least'.
Suggestion: expend the least
...end more money whereas,germany’s people expend least amount on all the given consumer goods ...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...nce, it is vivid that in case of Britain,the proportion consume by personal stereos ...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...s 160 and more than 160 thousand by cds.Also, people spend less than 160 pounds ster...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... is nearly 170 thousand pounds sterling.However,in france, people exhaust least on tenn...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...rly 170 thousand pounds sterling.However,in france, people exhaust least on tennis ...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'exhaust the least'.
Suggestion: exhaust the least
...unds sterling.However,in france, people exhaust least on tennis racquets,little more than it ...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , little
... people exhaust least on tennis racquets,little more than it on personal stereos and pe...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...oys amount is same respectively.moreover,they also use maximum money on photographic ...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... use maximum money on photographic films . Probing ahead,Italians spend most mo...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e maximum money on photographic films . Probing ahead,Italians spend most money ...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Italians
...on photographic films . Probing ahead,Italians spend most money on toys and least on p...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tennis
...ds and little more than this on perfumes,tennis racquets and photographic films and tha...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...ounds sterling. While in case of Germany,people exhaust almost same ratio on personal s...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , perfumes
...st almost same ratio on personal stereos,perfumes,toys,cds.as well as,maximum money is sp...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cds
... ratio on personal stereos,perfumes,toys,cds.as well as,maximum money is spent on te...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , maximum
...nal stereos,perfumes,toys,cds.as well as,maximum money is spent on tennis racquets is le...
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Line 4, column 440, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...erling and minimum on photographic films .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69950738916 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.91058296568 2.65546596893 147% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477832512315 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.774232577 43.030603864 364% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 231.4 112.824112599 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.6 22.9334400587 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 5.23603664747 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0670933607783 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485832746291 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377009984954 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577145717892 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354420165283 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.2329268293 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.67 11.4140731707 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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