One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that the young children should have knowledge about the growth of vegetable and keeping animals.There is wide spread worry that it would lead myriad of concerns in one's life.In my opinion this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected.
To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favour of my stance.The most prepondrent one is that the animal keeping and growing plants connect the children with nature which may help to protect the environment in future.It cannot only contribute
to make them clam,but leads to numerous other benefits in various fields.Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers,masses can enhance the quality and productivity with much ease,efficacy and convenience.Needless to say all these merits stand good at one's stand as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned prepositions is that it is likely to help excel and thrive in varied areas.Besides,the children who know about agriculture can have better job options in future related to this field like agriculture professor and many other.For instance,study results are published by government of Australia in May. 2012 and March 2014 clearly indicate that learning about agricultural activities is crucial and critical for the development of society.
On the other hand, a section of society contraducts the above -said view.They pondered that the children mind get distracted from their studies and they donot show any intrest in academic sector.Therefore it is clear that why they are not in favour of my view point.
To conclude that,having pondered over,it is crystal clear that the benefits of learning keeping animals and plants are indeed to great dire to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34121621622 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18305461009 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.998297482 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.5 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.1666666667 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105506624846 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499284685638 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366278639542 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514654819101 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374382003572 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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