Parents are the first role models
In our life, our parents are the people closest to us. In fact, our parents spent most of their possible time staying with us before we went to school. Therefore; many people say that our parents are our very first role models. In my opinion, I firmly believe that no one can be our role models better than our parents.
On the one hand, our parents always want to give us the best of life. first, our parents teach us everything about the world. Absolutely, our parents help us to say the very first words in life, to know the name of things around us, and to behave in standard. Also, our parents want us to grow up in a good condition. Undoubtedly, no matter how hard our family is, our parents will try to bring us to school, to have new clothes like any other kid, to have a delicious meal.
On the other hand, If all the world lies to us, we will only trust our parents. first, our parents always inspire and support us. although sometimes our parents said that they were alright, I still realize that they are not alright inside, so we have to try our best to not let them down. Second, our parents are the shoulders we can rely on every time. Perhaps, we can fail in school, we can fail in careers, we even can fail in life, but our parents never stop inspiring us to step forward until we achieve our goals.
As a final observation, although many people refuse that our parents are the first role models, I strongly believe that our parents are the first as well as the perfect role models. I will be successful in making my parents proud of me, and I will continue to become a good role model for my children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...aying with us before we went to school. Therefore; many people say that our parents are o...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...lways want to give us the best of life. first, our parents teach us everything about ...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... to us, we will only trust our parents. first, our parents always inspire and support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32573289902 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1733488771 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491856677524 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8370116882 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300364766059 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137894395049 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10146439021 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24884447212 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135258432656 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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