Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
No one can deny that there are pros and cons of sticking into old friends than to make new friends. If I am forced to choose, I would definitely love to make new friends. It is my firm belief that hanging with fresh mate is more important for many reasons for which I will develop my ideas on subsequent paragraph.
At first, in this global world you always have high possibility to be in touch with different ethnics people. From that, it is beneficial to learn different kinds of culture. By dwelling into diverse culture, your survival will be at higher level so that you do better in your life. I have to admit that my opinions on this matter has been influenced by my own experience. As I am living in most populated city of my country where people from different part of the country come here in shake of job and study. For this reason, I am getting lots of opportunity to be in touch with various kinds of personality. As a result, I am making different people as a friend and change them a lot and I learned so much from them. It is clear why being in touch with diverse people and making them friend is beneficial.
Secondly, if you stick into old friends you will miss chance of making new friends. You need to cope with world that changes by time. So, your need of making new friend is more essential. From different kind of people you will learn multiple things which will ultimately help you to grow in any kind of work you perform. Here, I would like to give an example of one of my very extrovert friend. Sticking into his character and by making new friends, he grows his business so much and he became successful and his business leads him to be a well-known person.
At last, although in some aspect keeping an old friends helps you; like in emotional things. But the world is so rude that being emotion has nothing to do with your survival. From the example of my father it will be clear how life becomes miserable by becoming emotional. My father always valued his friend and always helped them to keep friendship. While hanging out, it was quite helpful for him. He got emotional support from them but when he needed them financially, no one helped. From this it is clear how miserable life will when you valued emotion rather than being practical.
In light of these above mentioned reason, I firmly believe that making new friends is so important in your life than sticking into your old ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46952595937 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38008260285 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476297968397 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6784366165 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.72 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32098739176 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10137762522 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948465364493 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213554612544 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630639041648 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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