pollution had hits a critical level which needs a serious attention from governments, pollution causes a climate variation that threatening not only human but all living species, in this essay I will discuss the causes of this phenomenon and the measurement that government takes to face it.
Firstly, the main causes of pollution is the gas emission coming from factories, besides the waste dumping into seas and oceans. Furthermore the excess use of earth resources such woods, mines.., leave it without protection.
Secondly, governments have been trying to face this environmental problems since human started exploiting nature, they nowadays have trying to decrease the causes by several actions such as encouraging people to use eco thecnology which means using the wind and water as an energy generator, moreover they motivate society to reduce the use of cars and buses and motivate eco friendly transportation like bicycle, they even sets a day in the year for this purpose.
In conclusion, because of the human indifference and the overuse of the earth’s resources, besides the non respect of the earth safety criteria, governments face a dilemma. And needs to set a roles and laws as fast as they can to save humanity and living creatures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Pollution
pollution had hits a critical level which needs a...
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...coming from factories, besides the waste dumping into seas and oceans. Furthermor...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Suggestion: .
...use of earth resources such woods, mines.., leave it without protection. Second...
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Suggestion: set
... transportation like bicycle, they even sets a day in the year for this purpose. ...
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...on respect of the earth safety criteria, governments face a dilemma. And needs to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21674876847 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82925921567 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635467980296 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.903055729 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.5 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8333333333 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8333333333 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231211080588 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852564232312 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763986794893 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117157030013 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750770088343 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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