Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own life but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there has been a growing debate whether to be vegan or not. While there are advantages from eating vegetables, there also a good reason for their own life as well as the world as a whole. In my opinion, I believe that it would be better if we consume all kinds of food.
To begin with, consume wide variety of foods is beneficial for several reasons. Firstly, all the nutrients that we need for our body are sufficient. As a result, we do not have nutritional deficiency and become healthier in daily activities. Our universe has provided all types of nourishment; moreover, we can get those diet without any worrying. Because those are a gift from God, those do not run out.
On the other hand, human body needs not only fiber from vegetable but also animal protein. For instance, since kids attempt to eat side dish mother’s milk, they should introduce all kind of nutrients from different foods. This may lead them to grow faster and do not get malnutrition. Furthermore, omega-3 fatty acids, unsaturated fatty acids, minerals, and vitamins A, D, B6 and B12 which are produced by fish are claimed to strengthen bones, reduce the risk of asthma and diabetes in children. These indicate that we need animal protein not only vegetable.
To sum up, I side with those who feed all types of nutrients rather than to eat no meat or fish. It is due to our body need different kinds of nutrition. Additionally, it would be better if we fill our nutriment by consume meat, fish, fruit and vegetable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for instance, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72075471698 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60679616742 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7439978672 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1875 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181772105051 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527540176547 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656916332651 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113927033862 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720878899524 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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