There is no doubt that technology has given enormous amounts of entertainment such as the internet, television and social media. It is often argued that watching television consumes a lot of free time of individuals which could be indulge in other activities. However, I partially agree with this kind of notion.
Apparently, a section of society vehemently deems that television dominates a free time of many individuals because of multiple reasons. The first prominent reason is that the social life becomes silent if they get involved in watching series, movies, or any channels on the TV because they will not have time to interact with their loved ones such as family, friends and relatives. Moreover, people become less active as they do not participate in other physical activities which could be enjoy in their leisure time such as regular exercise or involving themselves in household activities like cooking, cleaning and buying groceries which are normally done by servants nowadays. This kind of lifestyle makes them lethargic and decline the rate of immune system and increase the body weight. Therefore, with all these reasons, a person should not spend more time on watching television instead of consuming time in other physical work which could be enjoyable according to their passion and hobbies in their leisure time.
On the other hand, several numbers of people have less free time to enjoy themselves due to highly competitive world. This change has been driven due to technological and digitalization world. With this effect, the stress and tension of a person has more inclined which could be reduced by watching TV at homes. For example, watching comedy shows is one of the best ways to reduce tension and stress. In this way, a person can laugh and reduce the tension of their professional life. Due to this reason, many people watches TV after coming home from a busy hectic work lifestyle whether he or she is a student or worker.
By way of conclusion, although watching television is one form of source to entertain our lives, it has some drawbacks which can be easily encountered if a person should follow a proper timetable to lead a healthy lifestyle and physically fit life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, kind of, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04359673025 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69218082808 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550408719346 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.713003676 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233712602107 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757280755015 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498704815046 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131266212683 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594233003376 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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