Young people enjoy life more than older people do
Enjoying life doesnot have any time and age constrains. Happiness is just the mental state of one's life. However, Personally I believe that life will be more fun, challenging and more joyful as we became older. Moreover, life become more elate when we understand deeper meaning of it. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
To begin with, My childhood happiness was just limited on chocolates and toys but as time passes i came to realize that life is beyond that happiness. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, i was very reserved kind of person since childhood, my childhood passes on closed room with toys and i wasnt able to figured out that what is happiness. As i was growing up i came to realized that happiness is something that comes from inside, does not matter whatever state we are in.
- The bar graph below shows the leisure activities of students The Graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012
- In the past century the steady growth of the human population and corresponding increase in pesticide use have caused much harm to wildlife
- It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts 76
- The Graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012 100
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
.... Happiness is just the mental state of ones life. However, Personally I believe tha...
^^^^
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... chocolates and toys but as time passes i came to realize that life is beyond tha...
^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rience is a compelling example of this, i was very reserved kind of person since ...
^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...d passes on closed room with toys and i wasnt able to figured out that what is happin...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... figured out that what is happiness. As i was growing up i came to realized that ...
^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... what is happiness. As i was growing up i came to realized that happiness is some...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, i feel, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 1977.66487455 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 407.700716846 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70394736842 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59112825563 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 618.680645161 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9238095099 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127303127443 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635914191663 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626750473666 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107121923296 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908832479676 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.