You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost You have still heard nothing from the airline company Write to the airline and explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it Find out what they are going to do about i

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing a letter to inform you that my suitcase has been missing for 5 days. I am Chris Wong and reside at HKG. On 5 August, I flew from Tokyo to London in flight number XZ1234 of your airline company. After I arrived at London airport, I noticed my suitcase loss and reported to one of your staff in London, but I still hear nothing response from your company unlit today.

My suitcase is black in colour and medium in size made by TravelPro. The suitcase also bears my name tag on it. My suitcase contains a few clothing items, a notebook, a travel charger and some important documents. The business documents inside the suitcase are indispensable for me.

I am disappointed with customer service not updating any information after a few days ago. I hope you would help me local the suitcase urgently. Please me about the whereabouts of the suitcase.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
... company unlit today. My suitcase is black in colour and medium in size made by TravelPro. T...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: medium
.... My suitcase is black in colour and medium in size made by TravelPro. The suitcase also be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62556634194 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6236423215 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4615384615 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21977601935 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712035534914 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044143852288 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116737055821 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049032845209 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.