some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In modern era the cutting edge tools play a vital role for the people. According to some group, they are happy while doing there shopping from the internet website or mobile application, but others denied that. I agree that technology made shopping easier and in this essay I will outline how it changes and shows some drawbacks as well.
On the one hand, I take the position with people who agree that online shopping is superior. Firstly, the person not require to travel to shop for the buying any product, because of this large amount of time and also money people can save. Another point that favor for buying items from internet is that great discounts and more availabilities of products. For example, website such as amazon offer original products from clothes to shoes in very less price comapred to market price. So, purchasing any kind of accessories is worth it from online.
On the other hand, people disagree that today's technology has made shopping not easier. The first and foremost point is lack of safety during the purshasing. In the other words paying the bill online is not good and internet fraud is become deteriorate day by day. For instance, In the UK one online retain shop offers 50% discount on buying pay online and immense public purchase it, after people find out that the company was bankcrupte, as result people lost their savings. Another point is that quality and replacement schemes are not appropiate in online. It always delibrated that electronic items such as computer, laptop are not in quality and replacement also not eay.
In conclusion, I opt that online shopping is easier, becuase it gives more variety in less price, however some people find it difficilty due to lack of safety and quality of the products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'traveling', 'travelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: traveling; travelling
...perior. Firstly, the person not require to travel to shop for the buying any product, bec...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...On the other hand, people disagree that todays technology has made shopping not easier...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...chemes are not appropiate in online. It always delibrated that electronic items such as computer,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42096399533 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1779876471 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23565700584 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813826282768 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121567719246 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147768018409 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606013131424 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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