Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, While others think that people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays the sports which are dangerous to play are becoming hot topic in public. Some people believed that the deadly sports like rock climbing should be not allowed to play, and I agree with this, however others reckon that there should be freedom in deciding the sports. This essay will discuss both sides then provide reason, why dangerous sports would be prohibited.
On the one hand, people should be free to play any sports because some people have certain skills in particular sport, and with these skills they can earn money as well as increase country flag around the world. For example, today many people want to reach top of mount everest but only few of them will able to reach the top spot of that mountain. So that it is people choice to decide sports in what they are good even if the sports are dangerous to play.
On the other hand, people thinking that banning those dangerous sports because these sports perform under the lack of safety. Take a rock climbing, for instance, in that sport only one person should climb a rock with no expert around him. If anything wrong happen like robe break then chances of death will increase. Due to not provided proper safety tools in dangerous sports so I think that these should be ban.
In Conclusion, people want to play those dangerous sports because they think their skills are really good in that selective sports, but others opinion that this deadly sports increase the chances of death more due to lack of safety so it not allowed to play and I agree with this.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...ever others reckon that there should be freedom in deciding the sports. This essay will...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...climb a rock with no expert around him. If anything wrong happen like robe break t...
^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'banned'?
Suggestion: banned
... sports so I think that these should be ban. In Conclusion, people want to play th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65682656827 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05582417513 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520295202952 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.651422418 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391904218051 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158594428695 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101568024129 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25258647605 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646346433177 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...ever others reckon that there should be freedom in deciding the sports. This essay will...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...climb a rock with no expert around him. If anything wrong happen like robe break t...
^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'banned'?
Suggestion: banned
... sports so I think that these should be ban. In Conclusion, people want to play th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65682656827 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05582417513 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520295202952 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.651422418 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391904218051 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158594428695 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101568024129 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25258647605 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646346433177 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.