Some people choose to work at one job for a long time. Others prefer to change jobs frequently. Which way do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
Certain amount of people opt to give their services to single institution for a longer period of time. While others choose to explore different opportunities every now and then. In my opinion, rendering your services to one institution is better approach in elevating your rank and status.
In present time, people are confused in context of their careers and job descriptions. They attain their degrees in one domain and end up doing jobs in entirely different areas, which leads them to change their work places every other month or year. They have become highly indecisive about their future. They keep on wasting their time and energy in looking for opportunities all the time. Today’s generation is quite smart! They make their own choices right from the beginning. So, they should keep in mind changing tracks frequently will not help them in settling in the future. Keeping the situation of joblessness in mind, one should adhere to the jobs which they have in hand. Therefore, right from the beginning one should apply where they feel they will excel in future as well.
In my opinion working in one place consistently gives a bright chance of securing your future. Dedication in one particular area always bears good results. For example, I started as a primary teacher, I worked hard in the same institution for 5 years teaching mathematics with full zeal, dedication and innovation, despite of getting offers from rival schools. I personally did not want to switch because, I believe once you have made yourself comfortable with the environment, it is best to continue with same enthusiasm, why? Because if I had changed school a year back all my efforts would have gone down the drain, which includes my connection with colleagues my understanding with my head mistress, my level of sincerity for the institution which I had developed over the period of time and I would have to start it all over again with other system. It would be just like back to pavilion. As a result of my wise decision, I got promotion from teacher to academic co Ordinator within 6 years of working for single system.
In conclusion, sticking to one job will always give you benefits rather than jumping from one task to another and not leaving any impact what so ever. According to me consistency is the key.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ices to single institution for a longer period of time. While others choose to explore differe...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...oose to explore different opportunities every now and then. In my opinion, rendering your services...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e highly indecisive about their future. They keep on wasting their time and energy i...
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Line 5, column 778, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...titution which I had developed over the period of time and I would have to start it all over a...
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Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...nd not leaving any impact what so ever. According to me consistency is the key.
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Line 6, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...According to me consistency is the key.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89030612245 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6502229225 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1258723138 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.85 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224812362416 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650623446759 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471120094687 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128712604994 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298400317875 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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