Director of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary for employers organisation says that in global market is is necessary to attract the best management talent
As globalisation is increasing all over the world. large numbers of companys is developing quite fast. No doubt ordinary employees work so hard for the company it seems to be unfair for these workers however, the director of an get large amount of salary in my opinion I think the director should be given more salary for the way they manage the company's reputation and economy.
To begin with, one prominent reason why director should be given more salary than the ordinary worker is because they are having a good work experience as well as education. In the other words, if company's director is having a good work experience whether it may be a bad or good experience, this is going to help a company a lot. For instance, the company name U.D patel company was having a loose but when an experience person joined the company because of his good idea and knowledge the company got a profit. moreover, this people are having a high level of study and are having having a high working skill and problem- solving attitude.
Secondly, there are many tight schedules to fulfill company responsibility as they have to take a vital decision and are constantly under stress .As they have to plan a lot for a company expand ,for success and most importantly they had to achieve task in an given time period additional, other workers will also get motivated to get promotions.
In recapitulation, we can say that companies should provide a bigger salary to the director has compare to the ordinary workers as this will motivate the ordinary worker to get good amount of salary and it will also help in getting the best out of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63286713287 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55561877911 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517482517483 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 143.0 20.2975951904 705% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.5 49.4020404114 422% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 662.5 106.682146367 621% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 143.0 20.7667163134 689% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 70.0 7.06120827912 991% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223514443543 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174782369051 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254871594152 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150720095322 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707678089959 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 71.9 13.0946893788 549% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -73.67 50.2224549098 -147% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 59.1 11.3001002004 523% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.76 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.38 8.58950901804 156% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 59.2 10.1190380762 585% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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