Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers. Employers' organizations say that in global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent.
What are your views?
As globalisation is increasing all over the world. large numbers of company's are developing quite fast. No doubt ordinary employees work hard for company it seems to be unfair for these workers. however, the director of an get large amount of salary. in my opinion, I think the director should be given more salary for the way they manage the company reputation and economy .
To begin with , one prominent reason why director should be given more salary than the ordinary worker is because they are having a good work experience as well as education. In other words , if a company's director is having a good work experience whether it may be a bad or good experience this is going to help the company alot. For intense, the company name patel company was having a loose but when an experience person join the company because of his good idea and knowledge the company got a profit. moreover, this people are having a high level of study and are having a high working skill and problem- solving attitude.
Secondly, they are having a tight schedule to fulfill companies responsibility as they have to take a vital decisions and are constantly under stress. as they have to plan a lot for a company expand, for success and more importantly they have to achieve task in any given time period. Additional, other workers will also get motivated to get promotions.
In recapitulation, we can say that company should provide a bigger salary to the director has compare to the ordinary workers has this will motivate the ordinary for cal to get a good amount of salary and it will also help in getting the best out of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i think, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69366197183 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61019101989 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8613932463 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.538461538 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192372196476 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751339760945 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518848722751 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133458001246 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065438122756 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.