In this modern world, it is assumed that we have a capability of utilizing the internet for various purposes. From my point of view, this trend might bring benefits such as convenience as well as time-efficiency which prevail over insignificant drawbacks.
To begin with, efficient exploitation of the internet can save plenty of time. Online shopping, for example, offers a wide variety of choices and the selected products can be delivered to the home of customers withoit the need of commuting. This development can certainly help people not only to save time but also to save money. Second, online communication with friends who live abroad is also possible via social media platforms. In the past, people used to send letters which require significant amount of time to be delivered while the internet users can make video calls at a substancial lower cost. Therefore, access to the internet has made our life far easier than in the previous century.
On the other hand, it can be said that excessive utilization of the web can be negative. One of the issues related to this tendency is that people can slightly reduce face-to-face contacts and become isolated to as a consequence. Rather than spending time with family, some prefer to stay online playing video games. Such tendency is likely to entail disruption in the bond with family. Furthermore, a slight change may occur in the relationship between friends as many people who surf the web tend to have online friends who may not support them in the real world. Thus , these users of the internet might cope with life chaplenges alone without the aid od their family or friends.
By way of conclusion, I believe that the use of the internet for shopping or social interaction purposes are definitely beneficial since it is efficient in terms of time and finance, surpassing its minor drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76878372163 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.074008868 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122082886356 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409229664418 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375245687822 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750544898895 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209406559413 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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