Love is invariably meaningful for almost all of us. Some may think it is necessary to be loved when love initially blossoms in college because it is couples' happiness inside. Therefore, this point mostly attracts positive reviews.
First of all, college love removes the barrier between two strangers. Because adolescents are likely influenced by emotions when they meet people of the opposite sex. They can easily make romantic relationships when they have not been subjected to too much pressure outside of society. Sometimes, it is tacitly regconized as a symbol of YOUthful love.
Secondarily, college students' relationships may help to remove the coldness in the souls of both sides. When loved, they can more easily open their hearts to receive messages from the other side. It is a considerable factor that supports to balance one's emotions and heal each person's pain in the past.
Some people might believe that we should love when mature enough. This thought can be confusing to understand how to love is right and when to accept the other person in a relationship. However, when we have not experienced the phonemes of love, we will not understand how twisted love is.
To be able to have a meaningful love in college, we must be more at heart to accept other individuals in life, thereby it is easier to understand ourselves. On the other hand we must condemn the narrow-minded selfishness of some parts because this is a negative influence on society, eliminating the prejudice of some people that should not fall in love too soon. Anyway, the first option will be feasible for the vast majority of Young people.
In conclusion, falling in love in college is totally acceptable because it is happy connection between two people. It is expected to be a modernity in the lifestyle of society.
Love is invariably meaningful for almost all of us. Some may think it is necessary to be loved when love initially blossoms in college because it is couples' happiness inside. Therefore, this point mostly attracts positive reviews.
First of all, college love removes the barrier between two strangers. Because adolescents are likely influenced by emotions when they meet people of the opposite sex. They can easily make romantic relationships when they have not been subjected to too much pressure outside of society. Sometimes, it is tacitly regconized as a symbol of YOUthful love.
Secondarily, college students' relationships may help to remove the coldness in the souls of both sides. When loved, they can more easily open their hearts to receive messages from the other side. It is a considerable factor that supports to balance one's emotions and heal each person's pain in the past.
Some people might believe that we should love when mature enough. This thought can be confusing to understand how to love is right and when to accept the other person in a relationship. However, when we have not experienced the phonemes of love, we will not understand how twisted love is.
To be able to have a meaningful love in college, we must be more at heart to accept other individuals in life, thereby it is easier to understand ourselves. On the other hand we must condemn the narrow-minded selfishness of some parts because this is a negative influence on society, eliminating the prejudice of some people that should not fall in love too soon. Anyway, the first option will be feasible for the vast majority of Young people.
In conclusion, falling in love in college is totally acceptable because it is happy connection between two people. It is expected to be a modernity in the lifestyle of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oves the barrier between two strangers. Because adolescents are likely influenced by em...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...derable factor that supports to balance ones emotions and heal each persons pain in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00660066007 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78057848766 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7298715857 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493101034978 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160528421221 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153864855207 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280509927766 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244598187044 0.056905535591 430% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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