Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some assume that getting used to unsatisfactory conditions of life is the key, whilst others regard attempts for getting better as more important. From my point of view, improvements will possibly bring life satisfaction and help avoid stress.
It should be admitted that tries are risky and not compatible for those with adverse health or financial states. First, with the intention of experiencing a postive change, people sometimes encounter failures, due to some tiny details, that were taken for granted. For instance, some complain that their former jobs were a way more decent, and they have made a wrong choice. Second, people suffering particular diseases or poverty, are not strong enough for making moves. Here, the situation can even end up with death, because of the hunger and lack of funds for treatment. However, these cases account for only a little proportion.
I strongly believe that, most of the attempts for improvement , bring both job and life satisfaction and prevent anxiety. Initially, without a passion for a work, any rational person would start performing reluctantly, for what he or she is usually scalded by an employer. Apart from that, many regret about untaken actions, via what, they would succeed. This in turn consequents an enduring depression, for what they blame themselves.
By way of conclusion, being afraid to experience a failure as well as not being open to challenges, will cause a big sense of regret, inspite of the fact that it had reasons to fear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hers regard attempts for getting better as more important. From my point of view, ...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at, most of the attempts for improvement , bring both job and life satisfaction an...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun regret seems to be countable; consider using: 'many regrets'.
Suggestion: many regrets
...calded by an employer. Apart from that, many regret about untaken actions, via what, they w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10569105691 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72645538806 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69512195122 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4706442076 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116756681936 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402611629071 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296023413561 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610529994369 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378156726451 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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