the graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different mode of transport.
the line graph depicts the number of goods transported by four variuos of transportation in United Kingdom into 8 years measures in million tonnes.
As can be seen, almost all of transportations represented a rise dramatically except rail way transportation while distributed by pipeline was the lowest during the times.
The number of goods carried out by road increased at the beginning of the year but then made up some fluctuations until 1998 and entered a slightly rise by the end of period, while the figure for water transportation presented upward dramatically through 1982 and remain steady before picked up in 2002. However, rail way transportation experienced a significant decrease during all of periods whilst transported by pipeline grew steadily for the most of the year and remained stable in the last.
Started at 40, water transportation came second but becoming third in the last year contrast to distribution by rail way at 60. Nevertheless, distributed by pipeline were smaller than road way ones becoming the highest proportion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the line graph depicts the number of goods ...
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Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...United Kingdom into 8 years measures in million tonnes. As can be seen, almost all of ...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
...ome fluctuations until 1998 and entered a slightly rise by the end of period, while the figure ...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... by pipeline were smaller than road way ones becoming the highest proportion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22054065122 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6726801328 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205572710876 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10925445183 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796405546465 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140849442565 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781535392849 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.