Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my best interest to join the international school trip to India. My daughter is studying in ninth grade and will be going for this three day trip to Delhi. Although I do not wish to stress her with my presence, this would be an incredible experience for both of us.
Firstly, I am an Indian, and I have spent my almost thirty years in India. I have traveled exquisite destinations in India, and would be the best participant to guide children about the art, culture, and music in the capital city of India. Plus, I know about the city inch by inch along with food, beverages, street markets for shopping and accommodation. Therefore, you will not be required to arrange a tourist guide to assist. Secondly, India is rich in culture, there are certain restrictions in some places, and I will be to address them instantly. As some rules are expected to be followed without signs and information. Thus, you will not be liable for any consequences arising from not abiding the rules. Finally, I will be able to share any experiences with all children so that they all can enjoy and learn more than expected.
If you will concur my nomination from this letter, I would be keen to know if volunteers are required to pay the fee for the trip? Also, will the accommodation will be arranged by the school management?
I am looking forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70296721142 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.8186232007 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227162408381 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858796231687 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824379495024 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125537751247 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547315762227 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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