Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?
Work has been a major aspect of a person's life, and nowadays most of the individuals work overtime in their offices or traveling far from their homes to work. This development has brought its merits and demerits to the mankind that can be discuss in detailed manner. However, in my opinion, there is should a good balance between work and other aspects of a person's life to ensure healthy and well organized living.
The advantage of occupying more daily hours of life to work is because due to the highly competitive world. These days the competition has become high due to globalization and digitalization. A person has to learn more than one or two skills in their sectors to get hired by a company with a good salary package. In addition, the expenses has been increased due to various exotic things in the modern lifestyle. Besides, a certain number of people come from different remote areas to work in metro cities because of more employment opportunities which has increased the competition in the job market. With this effect, the people are traveling far away from their homes to come and work in order to earn their bread and butter. Yet, this is a drawback to the modern society because staying far from home for work can lead to decline of social life and relationships with their loved-ones.
Furthermore, an individual who is devoted to its work will gradually build a robust and well-defined career more quickly. This can be observed by his early promotions, salary increase, and unexpected bonuses. However, as every coin has two sides, it also has a downside to a person's life and that is his or her social and healthy lifestyle. It has been seen that many adults in the age of 50s are having health problems like diabetes, headache, blood sugar levels and many others. With this kind of outcome, a person may not able to live longer and eventually dies before its time.
The work-life balance states to live a well organized living with the different aspects of life, as every lifestyle has its her own importance whether it is personal or professional. And, if a person invests and follow a well-designed timetable in his or her life, eventually, he or she will get their desired results by not paying any prices for their standards of living.
To conclude, there should be a good balance maintain between a work life and other aspects of life for a person to assure themselves to have a better standards of living otherwise there could be certain outcomes which will give its positive and negative sides of development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, as to, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80227272727 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68619731065 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495454545455 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1440645301 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.388888889 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301781897164 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953234709135 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733229624324 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170001995278 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061765723138 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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