You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-give details of your study plans.
-explain why you want to get a part-time job.
-suggest how your friend could help you find a job.
Dear Abhishek,
I hope you are doing well and excited to meet me since I'm going to pursue my master's in Ireland where you have lived for almost a year.
I got admitted to Trinity College of Dublin to pursue my master's in Machine learning with advanced concepts of Artificial Intelligence. The time duration of this program would be for two years, and which covers four semesters. The last semester would be an internship semester in a company to acquire the industry-level knowledge of the above specialization area of my postgraduate program.
During this time, I would need to manage my expenses since my parents can't afford the cost of living while I'm living in Dublin. So, I would love to work as a part-time worker anywhere in the city. In this way, I will survive in another country with my study in a college.
You mentioned last time that you have sources for post-graduate college students to help them for part-time jobs since you were a part of the student union group during your master's in the National College of Ireland. Thus, I would need your help to help me in getting a part-time job with good expenses, so that I could manage my cost of living at my pace. I am hoping for a positive response from you soon.
Looking forward to seeing you on my arrival at your place in Ireland.
Regards,
Shain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...doing well and excited to meet me since Im going to pursue my masters in Ireland w...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... to manage my expenses since my parents cant afford the cost of living while Im livi...
^^^^
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ts cant afford the cost of living while Im living in Dublin. So, I would love to w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65254237288 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6107472396 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4630353747 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315437272419 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107515847999 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861580529613 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177392876345 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994912060762 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.