The line graph depicts the information about the demand for electricity in England during typical days in both cool and summer seasons. The pie chart illustrates the information about how electricity is used in an average English house.
After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that starting hours in summer days demand for electricity in the nation near about 18,000 units. While, in winter days use the electricity approximately 33,000 units. In contrast, in summer season 3 to 9 hours use the electricity same level units and in the winter season touch the 40,000 units in 3 hours, then decrease the using in 6 to 9 hours. In summer season 12 to 24 hours used the electricity nearly 20,000 then fluctuation face in using in next hours. Whenever, in winter used the electricity grow up hour by hour then nearly 21 hour using electricity touch the peak level, then in last hours use the electricity closest 32,000 units.
The pie further collates that, people use the electricity (52.5%) for heating rooms and water. Next, 15.0% electricity use for vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools, and same use in lighting, T.V, radio by humans. In last, Individuals use (17.5%) electricity ovens, kettles, washing machine.
Overall, most of the masses demand for electricity in winter season. Heating for room and water more electricity use by people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...the electricity same level units and in the winter season touch the 40,000 units in 3 hours, then...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xers and electric tools, and same use in lighting, T.V, radio by humans. In last,...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...ric tools, and same use in lighting, T.V, radio by humans. In last, Individuals ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65745074168 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524444444444 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3388425989 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421067077431 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19349831374 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728505682426 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299377267085 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102110898338 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.