Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that maintaining the traditional culture is so important to keep identity that not necessarily means be closed to other cultures . this essay agrees with preserving the main traditions in each country or region ,However being opened to other cultures don’t mean necessarily losing the main traditions and legacy .This essay will discuss keeping the main traditions in each region and being so opened to the other world. Nowadays the majority of countries all over the planet specially the developed countries they believe in that specifically in economy you should have a great effect in other cultures to convince them to your thoughts culture language and of course products movies , Although you can not make a good marketing to yourself as a company or a country without linking your ideas your culture with others to be effective and try to create needs to your products or movies to strongly enter other cultures ,despite that like any thing has pros and cons there is a bad effect from that such as spreading violence and bad ethics . Maintaining the traditional culture is the best method for each region to express itself ,keeping the identity and main traditions ,Although each country has its own industries like Bedouins in Egypt they have hand made industries and their customs ,Beside that each country has a feature in agriculture or specific industry ,concentrating in develop this features will be great for the integration between countries . In my opinion I not totally disagree with opening to other cultures and acknowledging their heritage thoughts way of living ,but without losing main traditions and identity ,being a copy of others is completely not good for the integration between people or countries . ,Ahmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72562377636 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.660382392 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.6 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 20.7667163134 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288750025276 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165889155578 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0124540085884 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288750025276 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 50.2224549098 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.