Along entering the 21st century, humankind is facing a serious problem called the intense lack of freshwater. In order to relieve this pressure of water use, both individuals and government should analyze the reasons for this problem and take measures.
From my perspective, there are three main factors that cause the freshwater lack dilemma. First and foremost, freshwater distributes unevenly to an extreme extent. Such as in the country of China, there is a big unfair difference in water resources to be used between north China and the south; Secondly, with the rise of secondary industry, industrial enterprises have a huge amount of demand for freshwater used to manufacture. For instance, it's the construction industry which is the biggest consumer for freshwater whether in which country without any doubt; The third and worst reason for water lack is the pollution to the water environment. Floating garbage and turbidity which results in a reduction of freshwater resources can be found almost everywhere in third world counties like non-northern countries.
For the sake of relieving this getting worse situation of water lack, both individuals and government have the responsibility to take action. For one, to the government, the projects to redistribute water resources can be taken. The South-to-North Water Diversion Project of China is a good study case. Moreover, governments should improve the law system to strengthen punishment to the water ecology-oriented destruction conductions of establishments, as well set a freshwater use volume limitation plus charging system imitating what Australian government has been doing. For another, to individuals, education and advocation are critical and meaningful as they can enhance consciousness of freshwater conservation to the public teach people how they can contribute to such marine dominated planet.
In conclusion, despite some horrible factors that have led to the shortage of fresh water, we still should make introspection and take action to protect the water environment before the situation gets worse at a further step.
- some people say that it s better to teach language students in small classes whereas others think the number of people does not matter Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 79
- some people say that it s better to teach language students in small classes whereas others think the number of people does not matter Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 56
- There is a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem Discuss the possible causes for it What measures can be taken by governments and individuals to overcome this problem 84
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ater used to manufacture. For instance, its the construction industry which is the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54658385093 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13489281306 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1341065346 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295927500602 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100988108382 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085810646474 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172445311677 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827128882601 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ater used to manufacture. For instance, its the construction industry which is the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54658385093 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13489281306 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1341065346 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295927500602 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100988108382 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085810646474 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172445311677 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827128882601 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.