Do you agree with the following statement? To succeed in school or work, the ability to adapt to changing conditions or circumstances is more important than excellent knowledge in a job or a field study.
Undoubtedly, abilities for success play a significant role in people's daily lives in many of the places where they work or play. Some people think that deep knowledge is more crucial than the ability to adapt to changing conditions while others do not. Both sides may have their own reasons to support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that the ability to adapt to a changing environment is more important than knowledge for a success in school or work. There are several reasons as follows.
First of all, people who is sensitive to changing conditions are likely to make more money. Such sensitive people are open to new technologies, which means they can obtain new skill sets that current society requires. When such skills are obtained, they are likely to bring a better result in work, thus leading to a higher salary. A good example to illustrate my point would be my friends Seho and Woori. Both are nice computer programmers. Seho was open to accepting new technologies while Woori was an expert known to Windows communities. However, Seho started to make much more money than Woori after Seho learn how to use AI, artificial intelligence, in computer programming. Seho made relative complicated programs that can be used in analyzing a huge set of data, thus leading to a huge peak in his salary. On the other hand, Woori has constantly made conventional Windows programs. However, there are many Windows programmers in the market, so his salary has not been increasing that much. As this outcome shows that the ability to adapting a new condition and technology is more crucial to earn a large amount of money as a successful professional.
In addition, people who have an ability to adapt to changing situations can achieve success in their work. Commonly in society, it is crucial to know the trend in the market. People who are well-aware of new emerging market are likely to bring a better result in their work. For example, my cousin who visited Taiwan a few years ago found that a bubble tea in Taiwan would be appealing to Korean customers. The taste of Korean customers was constantly changing and he caught the trend at that time. His expectation was so successful that he could make a huge money by running a tea store in Korea. If he had not had that ability to catch the changing customer's needs, he would not have been a successful business owner.
All things considered, I adamantly believe that the advantages of having the ability to adapt to changing environments far outweigh those of having deep knowledge in a specific field. All in all, the importance of adapting to new technologies and new customer's needs cannot overestimated in terms of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'window'.
Suggestion: Window
...gies while Woori was an expert known to Windows communities. However, Seho started to m...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge money'.
Suggestion: huge money
...on was so successful that he could make a huge money by running a tea store in Korea. If he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82618025751 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7120906555 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491416309013 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.606156771 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.96 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.64 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196871560735 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546965476423 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807499985737 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138402348288 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809248855672 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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