Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?
Owing to the problem of what should we do with the malefactors caused a huge division in society, some people rekcon that the key to solve this problem is by forcing them to do unpaid work in the folk. In my opinion, I do not agree the above statement due to some reasons.
Firstly, the crime rate in all the countries is increasing dramatically nowadays.
There are alof of factors that leads to the inclined rate of the crimes. One of the factors is people doing drugs and drinking alcohol and that's because of some mental issues they have or even some family drama ,so the authorities should punch them for the reckless things they did.
Secondly, after thinking of another factor for the increasing of the crimes, I believe that the poverty is one of the reasons why.
Poor people has risen up in the past recent years which has an enormous impact on the rise of the criminals among society. Consequently, the individuals especially younger generation is more likely to steal and rob.
To sum up, people involve in such vigorous acts should be kept in prison. They should feel guilty of what they did, other wise the negative issues in the society will be increasing.
Criminals should be strictly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...le doing drugs and drinking alcohol and thats because of some mental issues they have...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sues they have or even some family drama ,so the authorities should punch them for...
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Line 11, column 117, Rule ID: OTHER_WISE_OTHERWISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'otherwise'?
Suggestion: otherwise
...ey should feel guilty of what they did, other wise the negative issues in the society will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, even so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45570857961 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8476681894 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378736863566 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113451117618 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983069842476 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14005577426 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113345750197 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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