The advancement in technology has brought humans aloof from the warmth of humanity, empathy and many more. While a section in society believes technology is a blessing I complete agree with the statement that technology is both a boon and bane on society and on its people.
The invention of technology is a scientific breakthrough in history which has become an integral part of human life. With the help of technology the accessibility, speed, transportation, communication and so on has taken an extra mile in everyday life of individuals. Besides these, technology makes tedious task easier to understand thereby upgrades the efficiency not only at workplace but also in personal life of people. Modern gadgets have given innumerable benefits and society is continuously reaping the benefits out of it. For instance, online platforms like Facebook, Email, LinkedIn aids in improving the social skills of people, emboldening them to know the trend in the market, sophisticated technological advances in science. Another example is introduction of Zoom meetings, Microsoft Teams meetings and so on not only saves the transportation cost but also provides an approachable platform for discussion and mentoring.
In converse, technology has proved it has certain negative impacts on the mental development of children, youngsters and adults. The wide usage of technology brings innumerable harm when used beyond the limits. Continuous sitting in front of the system makes people to live a sedentary life style which impacts various aspects of their life. Youngsters prefer to stay aloof from family since the continuous usage of video games, online dating sites and many as such are diverting their mind from social reality. People are becoming dependent on modern gadgets and hampering their personal and family life. For example the arrival of PUBG games have proved fatal in many corners of the earth, without giving a second thought children are imitating the instructions for fun, however the aftereffects of such sites are less know to the youngsters and children.
To recapitulate, with the advent of technology society has reaped both its advantages and disadvantages on a large extend. Even though modern gadgets have been given much space in our life simultaneously it has made individuals slave under its foot. Technology is both a boon and bane for the society
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es and disadvantages on a large extend. Even though modern gadgets have been given much spa...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is both a boon and bane for the society
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34042553191 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98018106431 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0306995253 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.117647059 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112337359868 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424226958212 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434580660785 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821446316369 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396737696707 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es and disadvantages on a large extend. Even though modern gadgets have been given much spa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is both a boon and bane for the society
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34042553191 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98018106431 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0306995253 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.117647059 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112337359868 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424226958212 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434580660785 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821446316369 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396737696707 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.