Some people say that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the fast-paced digital world, some individuals take the view that men have their more innate competitiveness than women. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this statement.
Firstly, due mainly to the conservative mindset of each family, men are thought to be more aggressive and intense. The women lack in the encouragement from the society so that is one of the roof reasons they hide their talent. To illustrate, in the Asian area, the men are considered to be of great significance as a bread-winner of their family. Every things associated with making ends meet is absolutely the responsibility of men. In lieu of that, women are likely to take over the care taking of their home, which makes no access for women to showcase their distinctive talents in the general public.
Secondly, there is plethora of circumstances that women are taken into account to have substantial competitiveness. The vast majority of head leader is women who accustomed to disrespect by all people in the past. Gender equality is a good instrument for igniting one's enthusiasm, and many management roles are currently occupied by women due to their superior thinking and industriousness. With the well-thought-out character, the women have faculties to catch up every thing at a breakneck pace. The women are capable of being more successful than men because of the timely grasp to any gold opportunities. For instance, the Elizabeth II-the Queen of UK have devoted her talent provoking UK to the super power nation in day-to-day society. Nearly all the men have a tendency to give up when they have their crazy schedule with their job whereas women would prefer positively utilize the golden opportunities to turn over a new leaf rather than withdraw.
To sum up, the men being competitive than women are completely wrong because of some aforementioned reasons. From my point of view, the competitive attitudes of both women and men are counting on the ambiance of their living rather than the inborn capacity.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02887652636 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582582582583 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3149740982 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233948484382 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840255537781 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692088114347 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176159749628 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061268630665 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.