You want to go for a short holiday and invite a friend to join. Write a letter to this friend, in your letter:
• Explain why you need a holiday
• Tell him him/her about the place you want to visit
• Say why he/she should come
Dear Praki,
I am planning a short vacation to Prince Edward Islands this summer and would like to invite you and your family.
As you know, 2020 was extremely stressful for me and my wife as we both lost our parents due to Covid in India. Further, we have cocooned ourselves at home due to Covid fear, which is further miserable for my sons and hence a need for a holiday.
My sister has her furnished holiday home PEI, I was considering driving from Montreal to PEI for the stay at her vacation home. PEI has wonderful weather, and the landscape is different from Quebec, the road trip will be worth it as this will be your first road trip.
The house is great for our kids to enjoy the outdoor and I think your family would enjoy a relaxing home stay. There is also a great fireplace in the backyard and I know you love to drink and sing by the fireplace, you will love it. Since we will isolate and socialize together, this risk is lower for Covid exposure and will be safe for your family to join us.
Since my sister is travelling to US for the entire summer, we can pick dates that suits us both for the holiday.
Yours friendly,
Mahek
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41203703704 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20054531682 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.1770749109 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17581537777 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721252042644 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031190377572 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999770011504 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307845532255 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.