Human activities have negative effect on plants and animals species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective actions to improve the situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In contemporary settings, species include flora and fauna become adversely effective due to activities of homosapiens. By followed this, some individual consider that it is too late to overcome this issue. However, others believe that masses should take effective actions to upgrade such criteria. From my prospective, former view is more supportive and couple of view points are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
It is worth considering that, species of plants and animals play prominent role in tasks of individuals which includes daily basic necessities. Because, there are numerous goods which are taken from such species. Thus, few of masses consider that adverse impact of such activities cannot be overcome due to some of reasons. First and foremost is progression in every sector which leads to destruction of habitat of such species. Because, there are plethora of industries, infrastructures and so on become progress which include necessity of land to set up their sectors. Due to which, they vanish forests and such sites which provides shelter to numerous of flora and fauna. Hence, when infrastructure is built thus, it leads to lose of their habitat which also represent negative impression on food chain. Due to which, ecosystem becomes disturb which results to extinction of species.
On contrast, others and I personally believe that such situations become upgrade via plenty of measures and actions. Firstly, legal authorities should domain crucial character to overcome issues of harmful impacts. Therefore, they should enforce strict laws against hilarious activities which are conducted by homosapiens such as hunting, releasing of chemicals via industrialisation which results to preservation of species. Secondly, law makers should organise awareness programmes regards favour of species and their valuable role. Because, when people become in contact with such valuable information regards such species. Hence, they may promote conservation of ecosystem and prohibiting detrimental tasks. Last but not least, there are plethora of National parks and biodiversity sites which should be opened to preserve species in their adaptive habitat which also balanced food chain. Due to which, adverse effects of human activities becomes prohibit and results to improve such issues.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, although tasks of humans are necessary which depends on flora and fauna. Yet, there should be number of measures to overcome this situations which converse ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...sks of individuals which includes daily basic necessities. Because, there are numerous goods whic...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...which includes daily basic necessities. Because, there are numerous goods which are tak...
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Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the reasons') or simply say ''some reasons''.
Suggestion: some of the reasons; some reasons
...ch activities cannot be overcome due to some of reasons. First and foremost is progression in e...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our of species and their valuable role. Because, when people become in contact with suc...
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Message: Did you mean 'numbered'?
Suggestion: numbered
...n flora and fauna. Yet, there should be number of measures to overcome this situations...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hould be number of measures to overcome this situations which converse ecosystem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63588390501 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87344662587 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53562005277 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1056172835 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141080916395 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453962853981 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435880890933 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102489484165 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067309257232 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.