Some people think sports are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports are thought to be crucial for society, however, some people think that they should be played for relaxing. I will discuss both of these views in the essay below.
On the one hand, sports play the principal roles in the development of countries. Actually, sports are not only physical but also the culture activities helping improve the relationship between the nations in regions. One clear example is Seagame which is the well-known sport event in Vietnam and South East Asia to enhance the sportmanship and interacts with neighbor countries. It is the competitions between athletes from some countries such as Indonesia, Thailand, Singapore, Malaysia. In addition, there are numerous campaigns established in order to encourage people playing sports to have healthy bodies and avoid illness.
In contrast, some people think that sports are only activities which they play in their freetime for having fun. It is true that sports have various beneficial effects on people’s daily life and leisuring is one of those. For instance, many companies organize the annual sport competitions like running or playing badminton as the team building activities for their employees to reduce anxiety after hard working and enhance the teamwork spirit. One more example regarding the leisure purposes of sports is the encouragement from the parents to their children to play some outdoor activities like playing basketball for being open-minded people.
To sum up, although some people think that sports are just leisure activities, I personally believe that they also have many positive impacts on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40476190476 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6932139463 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2999264164 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313518074738 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120629623304 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880626513059 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220241320055 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977646638487 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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