Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowaday, more and more poorer or richer nation in the world becomes new problem which complecated one of field of improvement in health, education and trade. Therefore , it should to take attention between richer nations and poorer so that it has growing which balancing exspecially richer nations has more carefully for helping underprivileged countries. In my view i agree with the importance to care feeling more for helping poorer countries because it Will give positive impact for it.
There are 2 main reasionble explanation for every richer nations care more for they have not ability to growing theirselves . firstly, these Will helping to down growing community poverty in poorer countries in the event of giving education and soft skill of economic for society poorer nations of needing . Secondly, through a partnerships of field education, healthy and trade between students, government along company or manager. These Will giving snow ball efects to invrove and growing by slow to perfect coutries.
One viable solution for this problem may to able to big impact for environment every poorer countries. Although, the richer countries Will have new problem. for example, these who have helped to Will geting difficulty for theirselves in feild education as lack of teacher because it have sended for poorer nations. On other hand, the several richer nations Will get pro and Contra for balancing environment politic domestic because it has helped them as well as it Must negatif impact for economics , politics, culture and conflic vertical by domestic. I think regardless a lot of impact, one step is all the matters to get giving a feeling peace and well-being for every countries in the world .
To summarice, I believe responbility for poorer nations should becomes priorirty by society in the world. I think the through of way by partnerships as sending teacher, training soff skill economics, companies, managers, students and commitmen between every govermence for helping each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'poorer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: poorer
Nowaday, more and more poorer or richer nation in the world becomes n...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld becomes new problem which complecated one of field of improvement in health, e...
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Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n health, education and trade. Therefore , it should to take attention between ri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Therefore , it should to take attention between richer nations and poorer so t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o take attention between richer nations and poorer so that it has growing whic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion between richer nations and poorer so that it has growing which balancing ...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ween richer nations and poorer so that it has growing which balancing exspecial...
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Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g underprivileged countries. In my view i agree with the importance to care feel...
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...privileged countries. In my view i agree with the importance to care feeling more...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...itive impact for it. There are 2 main reasionble explanation for every richer ...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... have not ability to growing theirselves . firstly, these Will helping to down gro...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...ve not ability to growing theirselves . firstly, these Will helping to down growing com...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erty in poorer countries in the event of giving education and soft skill of econo...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...education and soft skill of economic for society poorer nations of needing . Seco...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...c for society poorer nations of needing . Secondly, through a partnerships of fi...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a partnership' or simply 'partnerships'?
Suggestion: a partnership; partnerships
... nations of needing . Secondly, through a partnerships of field education, healthy and trade ...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng . Secondly, through a partnerships of field education, healthy and trade betw...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s of field education, healthy and trade between students, government along compa...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for environment every poorer countries. Although, the richer countries Will have new pro...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...richer countries Will have new problem. for example, these who have helped to Will ...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...education as lack of teacher because it have sended for poorer nations. On other han...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as it Must negatif impact for economics , politics, culture and conflic vertical ...
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Line 5, column 695, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l-being for every countries in the world . To summarice, I believe responbility...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
... responbility for poorer nations should becomes priorirty by society in the world. I th...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the world. I think the through of way by partnerships as sending teacher, trainin...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...panies, managers, students and commitmen between every govermence for helping ea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anagers, students and commitmen between every govermence for helping each other....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32075471698 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76236991305 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531446540881 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3866531627 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400332627907 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156436214734 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105358395337 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275280521067 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10091802871 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'poorer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: poorer
Nowaday, more and more poorer or richer nation in the world becomes n...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld becomes new problem which complecated one of field of improvement in health, e...
^^
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n health, education and trade. Therefore , it should to take attention between ri...
^^
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Therefore , it should to take attention between richer nations and poorer so t...
^^
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o take attention between richer nations and poorer so that it has growing whic...
^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion between richer nations and poorer so that it has growing which balancing ...
^^
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ween richer nations and poorer so that it has growing which balancing exspecial...
^^
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g underprivileged countries. In my view i agree with the importance to care feel...
^
Line 1, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...privileged countries. In my view i agree with the importance to care feeling more...
^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itive impact for it. There are 2 main reasionble explanation for every richer ...
^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... have not ability to growing theirselves . firstly, these Will helping to down gro...
^^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...ve not ability to growing theirselves . firstly, these Will helping to down growing com...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erty in poorer countries in the event of giving education and soft skill of econo...
^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...education and soft skill of economic for society poorer nations of needing . Seco...
^^
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...c for society poorer nations of needing . Secondly, through a partnerships of fi...
^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a partnership' or simply 'partnerships'?
Suggestion: a partnership; partnerships
... nations of needing . Secondly, through a partnerships of field education, healthy and trade ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng . Secondly, through a partnerships of field education, healthy and trade betw...
^^
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s of field education, healthy and trade between students, government along compa...
^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for environment every poorer countries. Although, the richer countries Will have new pro...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...richer countries Will have new problem. for example, these who have helped to Will ...
^^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...education as lack of teacher because it have sended for poorer nations. On other han...
^^^^
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as it Must negatif impact for economics , politics, culture and conflic vertical ...
^^
Line 5, column 695, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l-being for every countries in the world . To summarice, I believe responbility...
^^
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
... responbility for poorer nations should becomes priorirty by society in the world. I th...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the world. I think the through of way by partnerships as sending teacher, trainin...
^^
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...panies, managers, students and commitmen between every govermence for helping ea...
^^
Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anagers, students and commitmen between every govermence for helping each other....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32075471698 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76236991305 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531446540881 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3866531627 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400332627907 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156436214734 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105358395337 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275280521067 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10091802871 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.