With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which, if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?
Today, there is an increased number of people consuming fast food on a regular basis that make them be related to serious health problems. I completely disagree with the proposal of some that the final action to address this problem is to ban fast food chains completely because there are better solutions such as promoting health and exercising regularly.
It is true that fast food containing a lot of sugar, salt and saturated fats is extremely unhealthy and causes obesity, diabetes, high blood pressure. However, this is most likely to happen to frequent eaters, who fail to control their insatiable appetite. To most people who are opting for junk food, fast food, the name itself indicates it is not only available very quickly, but also cheap. Therefore, it would be improvident to forbid fast food completely even if it causes health problems to the consumers because not everyone has time to prepare balanced food. These packaged meals are a boon for people who cannot cook proper meals every day. In addition, prepackaged food services provide an employment to a numerous number of people. If the governments prohibit it, the level of unemployment will rise dramatically.
As people should take responsibility for their health and controlling their diet by themselves, some alternative measures can be taken to reduce this phenomenon. People ought to take awareness of the consequences of eating too much junk food. Proper time management should be encouraged in order to ensure proper meals and adequate workout. Besides, the manufacturer should offer burgers, hotdogs that are less calories and healthier by pairing it with a whole wheat bun and fresh toppings, or choose leaner meats like chicken or turkey.
In conclusion, banning fast food is totally defective as it is not the only remedy to improve people’s health. Instead of this, different actions should be done.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer calories'?
Suggestion: fewer calories
... should offer burgers, hotdogs that are less calories and healthier by pairing it with a whol...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun calories is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... should offer burgers, hotdogs that are less calories and healthier by pairing it wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16286644951 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73846652901 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0431681505 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327406560388 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997564409912 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868516631319 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201344803936 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06499898637 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.