Bicycle, being the most convenient mode of transport, has lost its popularity in the recent years. The reasons behind this changed phenomenon could be the advancement in the technology and changed preferences of the people. However, individuals can still be motivated to opt for bicycles in their daily routines.
No doubt, the use of bicycles has many health as well as social benefits which include strong leg muscles and cost-effectiveness respectively. Why people are abandoning the use of bicycles is directly related to the availability of other fast and more developed modes of transports. The cars and motorbikes make it easier for the people to commute to their destinations in lesser time as compared to bicycles. Moreover, life is quite fast-paced today, so, travel by bicycle is not possible in many situations.The use of bicycles is, indeed, declining in many parts of the world as people find it more time-consuming to cover their distances by these. Needless to mention, nowadays, having bicycle is not considered as a privilege but the symbol of poverty. Therefore, people from all age groups choose other means of transport rather than using bicycle.
Although majority of the citizens are discarding use of this ancient mode of travel, yet there are some initiatives by which the attitudes of the people can be changed. First of all, they can be made aware regarding the increased rates of pollution in the cities. Government can encourage the residents to
follow the Go-Green policy. As bicycles is an eco-friendly option, everyone should contribute to limit fuel-consumption and emissions. Secondly, the health benefits of regular cycling should be promoted by organizing seminars and cycling-events. Health specialists can recommend people to use bicycles to travel short-distances which can result in better stamina and fit body.
To sum up, though the use of bicycle has now become obsolete, the habit of using it regularly can be revived again. It will involve the efforts of government and the awareness among the masses.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...s. No doubt, the use of bicycles has many health as well as social benefits which includ...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ycle is not possible in many situations.The use of bicycles is, indeed, declining i...
^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...overnment can encourage the residents to follow the Go-Green policy. As bicycles ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, no doubt, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28048780488 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06454461061 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4662706698 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425774593868 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114059119563 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814143899997 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20540660448 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604061268607 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...s. No doubt, the use of bicycles has many health as well as social benefits which includ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ycle is not possible in many situations.The use of bicycles is, indeed, declining i...
^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...overnment can encourage the residents to follow the Go-Green policy. As bicycles ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, no doubt, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28048780488 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06454461061 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4662706698 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425774593868 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114059119563 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814143899997 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20540660448 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604061268607 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.