in order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
University tuition is the main reason of drop out of numerous students as it is undoubtedly high-priced, so a great number of graduated high schoolers do not have this opportunity to accomplish university registration. I assume that education should be free to encourage students to carry on with their studies.
Many actions can be taken to eliminate fees. The first point to mention is that Some students who have rich intelligence have to leave their studies to reduce the cost of living. there are many people who have potentials to do something in some fields and They will be beneficial for their countries yet, they are not capable of paying huge university fees. Therefore, they study up to university and then they leave their studies. So, country loses its talented people who can be useful for their society development but due to expensive higher education, pupils leave their studies to reduce the cost of living and they would rather to find an easy job which does not need any academic degree.
Many actions can be taken to eliminate the exorbitant fees . Another reasons for put an end to fees is that students encourage to leave country. some pupils with great curriculum vitae prefer to follow their studies in another country without paying the tuition. therefore, many countries offer free education and special training to international students and also give them job offers with high salaries. For instance, Germany offers free engineering education to international pupils and after education
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- in order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone to what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71928182379 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2272686426 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305022981974 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114288994339 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344416819311 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21355621899 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253654074701 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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