The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005
The chart shows the number of students enrolled in a certain university subject in 2005. The chart provides fairly specific information on the number of male and female students studying certain subjects.
For sciences, we looked at the chart and found that this is a subject that is loved by many male students (about 22,000 male students choose this subject). For the social sciences, we can see that this is the subject of choice for the majority of female students (nearly 25,000 female students choose to study this subject). The subject with the lowest number of male students is languages and arts (just under 3,000 male students prefer these two subjects), perhaps these are two subjects that require ingenuity and perseverance so the majority of boys do not choose these two subjects. The two subjects are not preferred by female students and are selected for at least law and mathematics (fewer than 6,000 female students are enrolled in law and only about 5,000 female students are enrolled) The remaining subjects are humanities and literature, the number of male and female students enrolled in these two subjects is not much difference. The chart shows the interests of students in certain subjects of the university. Depending on gender, interests, and receptiveness, the students will have different options.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 937, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13953488372 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59772334488 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437209302326 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.7303697777 43.030603864 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.125 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324995111996 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226473158011 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179942394158 0.0843802449381 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365176247023 0.15604864568 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124427933961 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.