Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advertisement plays a vital role in this modern era as it is one way to reach new types of product to consumers by giving information about the precise product. Some may oppose with the idea of advertisement where it make goods seem better than in reality. However, I personally support the idea and the reasons will be explore in the following passage.
To begin with, the companies use advertising to attract attention of a customer with use of celebrity endorsement because when the well known people advertise the product, the people who are his or her fan will trust the celebrity and eventually led to buying of a product. My own experience is compelling example to what I mean. I have a stores call idesire, consisting different types of apple product. So in order attract customers I usually spend huge sum of money in advertising the product. Beside it's disadvantage, I advertise the products advantage so that I can attract customers with the help of celebrity. Therefore, advertisement actually make product seems good when we don't show the products negative side just to reach the product to customers.
In addition, when advertising the product, the advertiser make a glims of product which is barely to see. In that clip advertiser just make small video so that customers can easily trust. For instance, I being a regular customer to one of the well known company. I have seen in social media advertising a laptop. I have seen advertiser, advertising the product by making it more appealing like protable, durable and storage of laptop etc without mentioning other negative points. As a result, so couldn't stop buying the laptop and after using it for few month, the laptop didn't function well as it has started slowing. With this reason I feel that product actually look nice on advertisement not in real.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that the advertisement make product looks good than they really are because the advertiser make products appreanrance more appealing to get customers attention and moreover, they neglect the negative point of the product by showing short video which is enough to divert the people's attention to their product.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99725274725 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83159941712 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.453165436 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311221462102 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101304448308 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690565221127 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210503433116 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386641831453 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.