More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extent do you agree or disagree with the

it is a fact that using traditional medicine to cope with modern diseases is the aim of many individuals. They believe that it's bright several benefits more than using modern medicine. I completely agree with this, and the below lines justify my opinion.

the first reason for this is because it's derived from plant-based, the that the plant species are grown in plenty local as well as easy to find here and there. if the diseased person paid a lot of money to cure the common disease, it would take a long time, in other words, leave various symptoms due to side effects of modern medicine. In reality, usage of available herbal medicine it's would help progress health totally and not harmful. For instance, honey turmeric powder was several trusts of people using, it contains ingredient natural to treat stomach ache

In addition to the reason above, I also believe that when cured completely, the recurrence rate of medicine- herbal users is more likely to be lower than that of pharmaceutic medicine users. Because usage modern medicine only cures the disease, instead of treating the root of the illness. For instance, obesity illness is the result of eating fast food and don't apply regular exercise. Then, they take weight loss pills in their bodies. As a result, loss of body weight and dehydration. Last but not least, folk medicine has few side effects and it is cheap to be bought.

To conclude, I totally agree with returning to conventional medical solutions to treat current sickness. This is due to their extremely popular finding, few undesirable effects, and cured rate higher.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94814814815 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49109249891 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1604805278 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239525630561 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714146990483 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618137059058 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134316722225 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526524312065 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.