the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufacruted.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The process describes the way in which instant noodles are made.
Overall, this process consists of 2 main stages beginning with a flour truck being delivered to storage silos and then ending up with labelling and sealing stages. It is necessary that product cross through each stage otherwise the whole process could be destroyed if a single step is skipped.
In the beginning main stage of the process, flour is put into storage silos. Then, water, oil are mixed with flour by a special mixer. These mixture are rolled to dough sheets by rollers. Subsequently, the mixture is through dough strips to noodle discs.
In the second main stage, these products are put through hot oil to fry and then the noodles are dried. Following this, the noodles are put into cups with vegetables and spices. Finally, the noodle cups are labelled and sealed by labels, which completes the instant noodle manufacturing process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...put into storage silos. Then, water, oil are mixed with flour by a special mixer....
^^
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mixture' or 'These mixtures'?
Suggestion: This mixture; These mixtures
...re mixed with flour by a special mixer. These mixture are rolled to dough sheets by rollers. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02614379085 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39768638394 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5729663176 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960038899057 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448522744553 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388316430372 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712736270292 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417566426651 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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