Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In in terms of a country’ advancement, there are two schools of thought on this point. the former gravitates towards economic indicators, like GDP, while the latter argues that other aspects of a society development are as much important, which is also my point of view.
On the one hand, there are 2 key reasons why economic growth is deemed as a fundamental goal for an economy. A thriving economy can not only result in strong job creation but also provide an adequate universal healthcare system for the majority of its population. More specifically, a healthy economy is obviously an attractive one in the eye of foreign investors, which means international conglomerates such as Samsung, are very likely to relocate their factories to these developing economies. As a result, a great number of jobs are generated and in turn, more and more people can enjoy improved living standards. More importantly, with higher tax revenues collected from many foreign establishments, a government is able to create a health safety net for its citizens, which directly contributes to the overall productivity as a large proportion of population is insured against sickness.
On the other hand, it is argued that there are equally considerations regarding the progress of a nation, which is congruent with my view. These are environment and equality. Needless to say, a strong economy does not necessarily associate with a clean environment. This can be seen in the case of China where the economic expansion is happening at the cost of air quality. It has been reported that the air in Beijing is heavily polluted, thus making the citizens prone to fatal diseases, like pneumonia. Furthermore, a rapid developing country can cause great tensions among different classes of a society. To generate more profits, many are not reluctant to take advantage of disadvantaged people (e.g. the poor or women). In the long term, this could result in a higher level of unfairness and ultimately destroy the social stability. More seriously, such public disquiet likely lead to protests on a national scale and capital withdrawal by foreign businesses is inevitable.
In conclusion, although it is understandable that economic growth is essential factor for any government, I strongly believe that factors, including environment and equality, should be considered as equally significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., furthermore, if, regarding, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27704485488 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09870617131 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598944591029 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7243779198 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.647058824 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122600302998 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034860950244 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360679069682 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070554773397 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00731012416611 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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