What do you think is the best way to find a job: by gaining more knowledge and education or through more practical skills?
whether knowledge and education or practical skills are the best factors for finding a job remains controversial. some people think that gaining more knowledge and education brings multiple benefits for finding a job, while others claim that practical skills are the main factor in finding a job. this phenomenon will be examined in this essay.
On the one hand, some careers, such as doctors, surgeons, accountants, engineers, etc., need a certain level of in-depth knowledge. Those who wish to perform these jobs must possess a particular level of understanding; otherwise, it might lead to unpredictable repercussions. Furthermore, getting more knowledge and education helps university graduates have an easier time finding a good job. To put it another way, individuals with a tertiary degree are ahead of others who do not, and that might be the decisive factor in obtaining a satisfying job.
On the other hand, some careers, along the lines of chef, tailor, barber, manager, bartender, flight attendant, etc., do not demand knowledge, but the main factor for these jobs is practical skills. these jobs require constant practice in order to achieve high qualifications and get a good job. The more the students practice, the more profession">professional they become. Moreover, while knowledge may be acquired from teaching, life skills must be acquired through time and exposure to real-world circumstances. it helps in the smooth and reasonable resolution of difficulties. There are a myriad of skills to be identified, but honing essential work skills can help one advance in his or her profession.
All points considered, it is the type of profession that determines whether knowledge and education or practical skills are the most crucial factors in acquiring a job. What we need to do is set up the appropriate profession">professional growth path to become an expert and get a satisfying job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38410596026 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61205919443 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5552572287 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402322339533 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122312081017 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114747843475 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241815165567 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965669987701 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.