The diagrams below compare the total number of visitors and their satisfaction level before and after the renovation of Ashdown Museum. In general, while the majority of the visitors were dissatisfied in the year before renovation, almost same majority of people were satisfied after the renovation of the museum.
More specifically, in the year before refurbishment, the visitors rated themselves as highly dissatisfied, at 40%. This value decreased in the year after refurbishment, at 35%. However, the proportion of visitors showing no response were similar in both time periods, only at 5%. While the number of visitors who were extremely dissatisfied during the period before renovation happened, the number significantly decreased in the year after renovation occurred, with nearly 10000 visitors rating themselves as dissatisfied.
Interestingly, as is presented in the diagrams, the number of visitors who were mostly dissatisfied before the year of refurbishment, with nearly 49000 dissatisfied people, significantly turned out to be highly satisfied than ever, with about 67500 people. Nevertheless, the increment in the proportion of satisfied responses indicates that the total number of visitors in the Museum rose after the refurbishment, as did their satisfaction, which was not the case for the early period before renovation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the early period before renovation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75124378109 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25249873955 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487562189055 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9820289432 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165669475119 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08524772358 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542377956483 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126412261237 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232724110175 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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