Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this era of cutting-edge technology, many scientific advancements has been made in the world. Out of many, genetic engineering is also one of the most important technique which is able to create an beneficial impact on societies. There exists some opinions of people, where people might think genetic engineering as a menace to the lives on the earth. I believe that genetic engineering has two main benefits, but do think that there js one major disadvantage which will be discussed below.
First of all, the manipulation of genes for various purposes is advantageous because it helps to increase the crop yield in agriculture. For example, a highly resistant Bacillus thuringensis cotton plant, which is more often than not called Bt-cotton, has been introduced through genetic engineering. This crop is highly resistant to insects,pests atack. Moreover, Holstein Friesian, a breed of cow, is produced by genetic engineering that is promised ti give more milk than any other breeds of cow so far. So, it is clearly advantageous and beneficial for the societies. In addition to this, many economic developments are driven by the introduction kf genetic engineering in several fields.
Second of all, genetic engineering is considered as one of the best achievements in science and technology. It is of significant value to societies because it has made the production of cloned to be possible with certainity, in most of the cases. For instance, scientists hace been successfully producing clones of sheep, with the help of genetic engineering alone. Furthermore, the test tube babies can be produced by virtue of it. This shows that genetic engineering has been contributing societies in various important ways. People can live a sophisticated life as there is a science that can turn any impossible thing yo possible.
However, there exists one disadvantage about gene manipulation: the loss of biodiversity. For example, beneficial insects are in the verge of complete extinction. Moreover, indigenous breeds of plants and animals are getting least importance when genetic engineering has introduced much advanced forms of floras and faunas. This can be considered as a menace to the life on the world because some insects, say ladybird beetle, which are known to be the beneficial insects, are recieving toxins while in search of foods. The genetically modified plants contains toxins which are released when any insects feeds on them. Aside from this, high yielding local breeds of animals are facing huge difficulties for their survival.
In conclusion, genetic engineering is clearly an important aspect for the society for the two reasons oulined above. Nevertheless, it is not a perfect idea as the loss of biodiversity is happening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31350114416 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08294807033 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519450800915 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1271112493 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22636702854 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605804012597 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655109554313 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133959916366 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729641383714 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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