Contemporary, many people spend their leisure time watching television such as movies and dramas. Therefore, television strongly influences the way people behave. I will divide three parts, teenagers, twenties, elderly people to support my opinion.
First, teenagers are the most influenced by television to bad things. These days, many students watch movies and imitate things that are bad to them, such as drinking beer, taking drugs, and fighting. I think it is the outcome that television made. For example, on news reports the teenagers wanted to be a superman like in an animation, so they jumped in the twenty- story building.
Second, television also gives hope to the twenties. Many dramas or movies tell us if you do your best, whenever you can get a good outcome. Accordingly, it lets the twenties challenge something. Furthermore, the dramas show us many jobs, thus, it can help them find their dreams.
Lastly, the television also helps many elderly people. In television, there are lots of programs that are related to health. Therefore, it can help elderly people. In addition, many types of advertisements can help them . This is because many of them do not know what is good or what is new. This is why the advertisement can help elderly people.
This is why I think television influences the way people behave. Consequently, I think we should watch healthy programs especially for children. From now, we careful to watch television and let it operate to ours good way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, lastly, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10569105691 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77422779964 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4797875808 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.8 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192426651116 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651848400374 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890259434783 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119947093307 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950227070837 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.47 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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