What do you think is the best way to find a job: by gaining more knowledge and education or through more practical skills? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
We always have arguments to compare the importance of education and practical skills. There are people who always believe that accumulating knowledge and education is the important key to getting a job. Others are quite the opposite, they think that acquiring more practical skills is more important. In my opinion, both education and practical skills are equally important, gaining more knowledge and having university education is essential for academic jobs, while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.
On the one hand, we cannot deny that if we absorb a lot of knowledge, graduate from university with a good degree in hand, it will be much easier for us to find a job. In other words, your education will be added to your application, and employers will look at it to see if you are a disciplined person in learning. If you have good academic results and a high level of education this is a good start for you, the chances of you getting a job are very high, of course I am talking about jobs like working office or working in an educational setting, these jobs require degrees and education.
On the other hand, for manual labor jobs such as seamstresses, carpenters, potters, …Jobs that do not require mental manipulation, book knowledge, they only need proficiency and experience, practical skills are the most important. To be more precise, these jobs just need a lot of practice, a lot of experience, they don't require any level of education, we just watch and learn to follow and draw our own experience, how to do it for ourselves.
In short, education and practical skills are equally important, depending on the nature of the job you do. To get a job, you should learn the requirements of that job, assess yourself whether you have met the knowledge or skill requirements of your chosen profession. From there, choose a job that's right for you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, in short, of course, such as, talking about, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80173282121 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518633540373 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2689700304 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326652836726 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134875049546 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750671915586 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206279713921 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083876276647 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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